Unwanted Criminal : Original Idea

Luis Film Idea

Film name: Unwanted Criminal
Tagline: You Can’t Run and You Can’t Hide
Genre: crime thriller
Characters: Undercover Police, Thugs,
Location: London, Paddington

Opening sequence

First scene: a group of thug-looking people are playing card games involving money are sitting around a small table. A phone rings and on of the thugs picks it up. Shot changes to a panicky person speaking of how “they are coming!” with the thug asking who?
A man dressed in business dress appears in the distance, he shouts at them and in an instance they get up accidentally kicking over the table in the process, with one guy picking up some of the money and running.
It turns into a chase as the well-dressed man runs after the main thug, they run as they encounter obstacles avoiding them, the well-dressed man then disappears and the thug takes a rest catching his breath. Then it switches to an extreme close-up shot from the side of another well-dressed man with a black jacket, the next shot shows him lighting a cigarette and putting it in his mouth, it then switches back to the thug, he looks back and the well-dressed man has caught up to him so he begins to run again the shot changes to the other well-dressed man smoking the cigarette with the smoke surrounding the frame, the thug keeps running and then turns his head back to look if he is still being chased. When he turns his head back he has no time to move out of the way of a man and he bumps into him and falls to the floor, he looks like he is in pain, it turns to a blurry low angle shot of a well-dressed man the focus then sharpens and you see that it is the well-dressed man that was smoking, the man asks “where is he?” the thug says “I don’t know!” the man then takes out a gun and says “what you don’t know CAN kill you” it then goes black and you hear a gunshot and the film name runs, then the company name and then the credits.